Made of more

Once upon a time there was a  lonely cloud. That lived his life well because he took on a human's life. The cloud helped out everywhere, if he saw something wrong he would be there, but the cloud never thought he fitted in.

The cloud that came from the sea was made of more.the more did the more he became. The cloud was different from the rest and different to see. He looks in the mirror and thinks… then looks down; then the cloud finds a fire then starts to rumble and all of his rain poured out then all around there was black smoke. The things I liked about this short film was that it teaches you that you can be different from the rest and you don’t have to be the same as anyone else. I also liked that it teaches you that it doesn’t matter what other people think of you. I don’t really like this because it didn’t take that long and why did the cloud go into the parking gare?

(AGE RATING)8+ (STAR RATING) 5 out of 5 because it teaches you to be yourself.

The lego story

Have you ever been playing with lego and thinking how did all start when did it all began? Well the answer is right here it all started in 1934 by a man by the name of Olay it all started because Olay's job went out of business.

Olay went through rough times like fires, rebuilds and deaths. When Olay pasted the business was taken over by his son godfrey godfrey wanted to do more than just sell wooden toys so he decided to make a block called lego it all started by just being blocks that you put on top on top on each other but everything keeps toppling over.one day godfree set off thinking how could he keep the blocks together when it gets played with he was tapping his pen when all of a sudden it got stuck on the lego brick so he thought he had to put tubes on the bottom of the brick and wella they sticked.after that you could make anything from boats to the eiffel tower.

That's how lego began a small business can rock up to the top and start a new craze and you never know you could start a business one day .

(Age rating) 3+ (rating) 5 out of 5 it was very interesting.  

Taking flight

S.O.S

• Key points/summary

• positive/negatives
• Age appropriate
• 5 star rating
• Emotive words

If you like exploring then you will like the short film that i’m writing about. The key point of this story is to use your imagination from exploring through the jungle to flying to the moon .it all started because the little boy got dropped of at his grandpa no nos and he layed down on this crate and looked up and saw a little red wagon on the top shelf so the little boy tried to climb up and get it but ended getting a lot more things down with it so that's how they started their trip to the moon and jungle then the  dad came home and said “WHY ARE YOU GUYS SUCH A MESS?” The End I give this film a 3.5 star rating because it was not that interesting in my point of opinion.

Slips

L.G. Link my ideas between my paragraphs

On the way home from bay of plenty  it was pouring down. It was horrendous! There was lightning and thunder and really bad slips. It took 7 and ½ hours to get back from Papamoa.

When we started driving home for 7 ½ hours Papamoa.It started off as a sunny drive home. Then it got darker and darker until the point that you couldn’t see.Next is was at the point that rain came down then...BOOM! Lightning struck. The boys already started to get annoying.’’Oh, Oh you won!’’

So now there a big storm, I couldn’t get back to sleep. I was to worried that we would crash. A couple of minutes later there was a warning for a big slip on the road. When we reached the big slip it reminded me of a river because of all the water and rocks. I open the window and whimpered, “oh It’s cold!’’

We had a little pit stop in Mouko for you probably know what.(tiliote)We saw the Aquabladz. When we saw the  Aquabladz we left  straight away! The Aquabladz are our worst enemies but sometimes we are frenemies.

We got passed the Aquabladz finally so we got home safely everyone got home safely it was a very fun trip except the way home.If you have To go on a trip make sure you have comfy clothes, A blanket,pillow,food and water.

Nationals plan

L.G. use some good ideas S.O.S punctuation

Dear Mr Winston Peters

I am writing to you to recommend that you choose  a coalition with national.

National will lower the tax prices

It will help with the people that aren't so rich. So the will have more money for food, clean water and warmth. The warmth and clean water will stop them from getting sick. The food will stop them from starving to death.

Cows farts cost money(labour)

Don’t choose a coalition with labour, why because they are going to make farmers pay around thirty dollars when a cow farts. But how will they now when a cow farts will they have the owner stand outside all night and day waiting for a cow to fart.

Lower the house prices(national)

It will be easier for poor people to buy houses. Because they won't have to ask inosite people like us for money.it will also save them time and money.

Please choose to do a coalition with national because it would be critical if you pick labour.

SPS CHEFS ARE BACK

L.G link ideas between paragraphs

On monday the 11th  of september, the room six kids cooked up an attractive experience. Along the way they had obstacles that they had to get around like getting the moose in the fridge at the right time. Also cooking everything precise.

For them to get the food precise they had to mix the cream until it turns into it turns into a cream consistency not a butter  consistenty.Next the white egg yolk to a fluffy  consistency. Then next they had to melt the chocolate chips in hot water on a stove. Once the had finished that proges they mixed all the ingredients and sugar. They put the chocolate mousse into cups and put them into the fridge. Once that had set for one hour they took it out of the fridge and put cream on top it and then put it back in the fridge for another hour.

The customers said they really enjoyed the tarterflet. But the chocolate moose was a bit sweet. When the waitress came in with the dirty dishes most of the cups we’re half full with chocolate moose still in it. They gave me some to try I agree it was really sweet. There was a big chunk of chocolate at the bottom of the cup which tasted like coffee which was really strong.

overall I think it was a pretty great restaurant because of all the laughter.    

B.O.P

                                                 BAY            OF          PLENTY

L.G link my ideas between each paragraphs

S.O.S punctuation

Type of writing=moment in time

When I got called over to marsiling my tummy starts to tickle I have bad butterflies that are  swarming in my tummy like a swarm of bees.

I am waiting behind the blocks… then all of a sudden they call out heat nine race twenty three. My heart is pounding I stand up on the block and all this random stuff go around my head. Then all I hear is “Take your marks BEEP”I dive in.

I do my fly kicks and come above the water and start my butterfly.I try with all my might to bet Bella it doesn’t work i’m just a few feet away. We finish the race.

I jump out of the pool. Bella congratulates me and I do back to her. I got last but i’m still happy with the time I got.  

L.G. Link my ideas between each paragraph

S.O.S Puntion

 Mr D

Mr D has shining blue eyes that shimmers in the sun. MrD has slick brown hair, blondish hair that flies in the wind. His beard is like a fuzzy cat getting brushed at the vets. Mr D has creamy, brown skin that looks like lion skin / fur. His lips are thin and are the colour of a red ruby.

Mr D clothes are as fashionable as Mr Makos. His arms are are muscular, long and strong like a bodybuilder. Mr D shoulders are buff and rounded like the top of  a pump bottle.

Mr D loves cricket and rugby. His favourite thing is sport.

Slips

L.G. Link my ideas between my paragraphs

On the way home from bay of plenty  it was pouring down. It was horrendous! There was lightning and thunder and really bad slips. It took 7 and ½ hours to get back from Papamoa.

When we started driving home for 7 ½ hours Papamoa.It started off as a sunny drive home. Then it got darker and darker until the point that you couldn’t see.Next is was at the point that rain came down then...BOOM! Lightning struck. The boys already started to get annoying.’’Oh, Oh you won!’’

So now there a big storm, I couldn’t get back to sleep. I was to worried that we would crash. A couple of minutes later there was a warning for a big slip on the road. When we reached the big slip it reminded me of a river because of all the water and rocks. I open the window and whimpered, “oh It’s cold!’’

We had a little pit stop in Mouko for you probably know what.(tiliote)We saw the Aquabladz. When we saw the  Aquabladz we left  straight away! The Aquabladz are our worst enemies but sometimes we are frenemies.

We got passed the Aquabladz finally so we got home safely everyone got home safely it was a very fun trip except the way home.If you have To go on a trip make sure you have comfy clothes, A blanket,pillow,food and water.

Love is challenges

Once upon a time there was three best friends Crayton, Sebastian and Edith. One day the three best friends went to the park.

Crayton asked Edith “ Do you want to come on the monkey bars with me?”  “Okay,” replied Edith“No come play with me” yelled sebastian! “How about we go play on the rocket ship,”Edith calmly replied “YEAH” answer the boys

So they walked over to the rocket ship Edith started climbing while the boys fighted over her at the bottom “ I like Edith,” “no I like Edith,” “ I like her more,” “ no I do!” moned the boys “ Edith who do you like better?” yelled the boys “ I li…” “ me oh thank you,” spoke crayton “ but she didn’t say anything,” replied sebastian “ Do you know what we will do we will do challenges for me,”screamed Edith !

“Let the challenges begin” yelled Edith! “First we are going to be seeing who can do the monkey bars the fastest,”  added Edith …

“Craton wins so now since you won and all and you get me … go get me some food, rub my feet, curl my hair and clean my room PLEASE   demanded Edith!! “You know what I think Sebastian deserves you more than me,” whimpered crayton She's a queen.   

So now you know how to deal with  boys all thanks to Edith I would call her a queen at getting rid of boys

Little miss fork went for a walk in the forest and started to talk, along came a parrot who stole her carrot so she stabbed him with her fork.

Safety first

L.G Use precise verbs

S.O.S Haven’t used get, grab and put

Include humour

1 title

2 Intro

3 matériels

4 Steps

5 con

Are you a DAREDEvIL  well if you are you’ve come to wrong place so keep moving. These are safety instructions not”I want to hurt myself instructions.

MATÉRIELS

-Safety goggles

-helment

-Appropriate clothes

-Shin and elbow pads, knee pads

-Gloves

1. First position your goggles to your eyes, your elbow pad to your elbows, your knee pads to your knees.
2. Second direct your helmet onto your head and buckle it up so you look like bob the builder YEAH!
3. Pull your gloves up onto your arms so you look like an overprotective gardener YEAH!
4. Chuck on your clothes so…. Um…. you…. Look….um…. Cool YEAH!
5. Open up the door(s) so you don’t drive right through the wall like a dume chicken would.
6. Hop into your vehicle correctly so you won’t break your neck and look like a piece of artwork gone wrong um YEAH!

I hope you’ve learn’t some more safety tips to stay safe everywhere you go.And don’t forget wherever you go don’t forget to wear your helmet like your idol bob the builder.

How to do a proper dive in swimming

Do you want to impress your friend when you go to the pools in diving competition well today's your lucky day follow theses steps and you will succeed.

What you need:

*A pool

*Diving block

*Togs

*Goggles

1. Put your togs and goggles on.
2. Stand on the block with both feet at the top so your toes are hanging over the block or one foot in front and one behind.
3. Crouch down while your feet are in the same position then push up a little bit so it's like you're starting a running race.
4. When you hear take your marks lean forward a little bit and when the buzzer goes push off with both feet and bring your hands over so ones on top of the other
5. Put it all together and you have done a professional dive.

I hope you have learnt something from me.Have fun winning or knowing how to do a dive you will be the best in the class.

DIY Fidget Spinner

L.G. write instructions that five year olds can understand

S.O.S precise nouns materials and steps

Bossy words.

Are you board? Well board no more with your homemade fidget spinner.

What you need: Six bottle caps, hot glue gun and sticks,wooden

Sticks, scissors, screwdriver and a marker.

1. First grab two bottle gaps, a screwdriver and someone over 9.
2. Take the two bottle caps and let your supervisor stab a hole right through the centre of the bottle caps.
3. Plug your glue gun into the wall.
4. whing up cut a wooden stick down to size with scissors so that it can slip right through the bottle caps and the caps can spin.
5. Let your supervisor glue the to flat sides together without gluing the holes.
6. Now mark where the bottle caps are going to go by putting a bottle cap between each.
7. Next glue the bottle caps on the marks.
8. Pick the sick through the holes and glue the ends of the stick.
9. Then once it's dried play with it.

Fidget spinners

L.G Use paragraphs to organise my ideas
S.O.S Use time connectives to order paragraphs.
Introduce aragument at the start of each paragraphs.
Use at lest 5 persasive words from the list.

S.P.S are you tired of listening to your teacher talk too much? And you're trying to find something to fidget with but you don’t know what ? Well get a fidget spinner. Mr Elder I’m talking to you.

Firstly, Mr Elder it was originally made for people with autism, anxiety and ADHD to keep them calm and focused.But the fidget spinner ended up being a big hit to everyone. The fidget spinner was made in 1990 but it is a big it now in 2017.

Secondly, Mr Elder it’s a stress relieving toy which will keep us calm, we won’t have  much work on our mind ready for the next piece of work. They will make more of us focused and get principal awards and more focused children will be more successful in life.

Finally, Mr Elder this toy is above all the other toys even hasbro gaming. I know people never brought that to school but there board games. I know the fidget spinner is not  necessarily needed here but it’s a stress relieving so come on what's so wrong with that. If people don’t listen the should be the ones that get banned because that's not fair on the good children that are actually good.

So Mr Elder have I convinced you that fidgets are allowed at school? So what are you waiting for go get one come on they don’t bite

Going to the dentist isn't that fun for some people! But having a school canteen you gonna go to the dentist a lot more. I’m going to give you three reasons why we should not have a school shop.

Firstly, we don’t need a school shop. But I know what you're going to say “What if forget our lunch” we'll pack it the night before and wella you won’t forget your lunch.

 Secondly, If we do get a school canteen it will introduce obesity to stratford primary school there will be less and less people running cross country. Every year 400 down to 302 thats a 98 different. Who would be running. Did you know that obesity as reached all around the world with at least 2.8 million people dying each year from obesity.

Thirdly, who's going to buy all the food anyway? Are the shops going to give it to us for free…. News flash the won’t! So what's the point? You could go buy it from the shop down town it's probably cheaper anyway.

 Did you know there is a such thing called 102 colouring. Its called tartrazine it is a cancer causing ingredient. Some foods can cause cancer such as red meat, salt preserved food and half foods. Some of the kids say we can raise money for cancer but some of the food have tartrazine in it.

So I hope you understand why we don’t need a school shop because more obesity, you can get cancer and who’s going to buy the food I’am absolutely sure the shop is going to have disastrous consequence, don't let this happen

Dear Mum and Dad

I just ran off the boat and jumped into the death of the sea. My mates start sinking because of their bags, it's was like a whale in there bag. My heart was pounding. Now everyone  re dropping like dead fish around me. I run down into a trench. One of my mates are running towards me. Out of the hils a bullet once clean now covered in blood that fires at him. I get down on my knees and pray he's gonna be okay. I decided it’s time to fight back. I can't stand to lose anymore friends. Only in one day. I look up to the sky. I’m paralysed for a second then something hits me in the chest I see a bright light. My eyes start to shut very, very slowly. I woke up in the doctor's tent. Even though this is my first letter it might be my last.

Love from Samara

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20.3.17

Samara Agent

Room 6

Stratford primary school

Regan street Stratford

Dear Mum

Thank you for coming to camp even though you we’re really busy!  

I loved having the big, big walk with you. It was a great experience for me! Thanks for catching me when I fell and rolled my ancol.

I wish I could be just like you when I grow up. I’m glad you came to camp I don’t think it would've been much fun if you weren't there. Because I would of hurt my ancol more!

Yours Sincerely

Samara Agent

The prices for NZ carrots has hit a high record. The price has increased from the last year. One kilo of carrots cost $3.53 last year it was $2.34. Since last  year the prices have been increasing on fruit, vegetables and dairy products hard growings last year in the north islands before christmas.

14.3.17

The swing bridge

It's my turn my heart is turning and twisting my tummy is going to explode!

 I take my first step onto the brown bored swing bridge.I take my second ...Then my third step….I look down I say to myself this is a amazing vei! I just want to stick my feet to the bridge and stay here for a year! But then I glimpse of sharp rocks and a hard flowing river.. Captures my eyes the trees start to blow on a ancel. My smiley face turns into a frowning face! I just want to run back to the end but i'm not just in case!