14.3.17
The swing bridge
It's my turn my heart is turning and twisting my tummy is going to explode!
I take my first step onto the brown bored swing bridge.I take my second ...Then my third step….I look down I say to myself this is a amazing vei! I just want to stick my feet to the bridge and stay here for a year! But then I glimpse of sharp rocks and a hard flowing river.. Captures my eyes the trees start to blow on a ancel. My smiley face turns into a frowning face! I just want to run back to the end but i'm not just in case!
you described what it looked like bellow you
ReplyDeleteyou done great with your adjectives and verbs
next time you could try add your five senses
you described what it looked like bellow you
ReplyDeleteyou done great with your adjectives and verbs
next time you could try add your five senses