Made of more

Once upon a time there was a  lonely cloud. That lived his life well because he took on a human's life. The cloud helped out everywhere, if he saw something wrong he would be there, but the cloud never thought he fitted in.

The cloud that came from the sea was made of more.the more did the more he became. The cloud was different from the rest and different to see. He looks in the mirror and thinks… then looks down; then the cloud finds a fire then starts to rumble and all of his rain poured out then all around there was black smoke. The things I liked about this short film was that it teaches you that you can be different from the rest and you don’t have to be the same as anyone else. I also liked that it teaches you that it doesn’t matter what other people think of you. I don’t really like this because it didn’t take that long and why did the cloud go into the parking gare?

(AGE RATING)8+ (STAR RATING) 5 out of 5 because it teaches you to be yourself.

The lego story

Have you ever been playing with lego and thinking how did all start when did it all began? Well the answer is right here it all started in 1934 by a man by the name of Olay it all started because Olay's job went out of business.

Olay went through rough times like fires, rebuilds and deaths. When Olay pasted the business was taken over by his son godfrey godfrey wanted to do more than just sell wooden toys so he decided to make a block called lego it all started by just being blocks that you put on top on top on each other but everything keeps toppling over.one day godfree set off thinking how could he keep the blocks together when it gets played with he was tapping his pen when all of a sudden it got stuck on the lego brick so he thought he had to put tubes on the bottom of the brick and wella they sticked.after that you could make anything from boats to the eiffel tower.

That's how lego began a small business can rock up to the top and start a new craze and you never know you could start a business one day .

(Age rating) 3+ (rating) 5 out of 5 it was very interesting.  

Taking flight

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If you like exploring then you will like the short film that i’m writing about. The key point of this story is to use your imagination from exploring through the jungle to flying to the moon .it all started because the little boy got dropped of at his grandpa no nos and he layed down on this crate and looked up and saw a little red wagon on the top shelf so the little boy tried to climb up and get it but ended getting a lot more things down with it so that's how they started their trip to the moon and jungle then the  dad came home and said “WHY ARE YOU GUYS SUCH A MESS?” The End I give this film a 3.5 star rating because it was not that interesting in my point of opinion.

Slips

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On the way home from bay of plenty  it was pouring down. It was horrendous! There was lightning and thunder and really bad slips. It took 7 and ½ hours to get back from Papamoa.

When we started driving home for 7 ½ hours Papamoa.It started off as a sunny drive home. Then it got darker and darker until the point that you couldn’t see.Next is was at the point that rain came down then...BOOM! Lightning struck. The boys already started to get annoying.’’Oh, Oh you won!’’

So now there a big storm, I couldn’t get back to sleep. I was to worried that we would crash. A couple of minutes later there was a warning for a big slip on the road. When we reached the big slip it reminded me of a river because of all the water and rocks. I open the window and whimpered, “oh It’s cold!’’

We had a little pit stop in Mouko for you probably know what.(tiliote)We saw the Aquabladz. When we saw the  Aquabladz we left  straight away! The Aquabladz are our worst enemies but sometimes we are frenemies.

We got passed the Aquabladz finally so we got home safely everyone got home safely it was a very fun trip except the way home.If you have To go on a trip make sure you have comfy clothes, A blanket,pillow,food and water.

Nationals plan

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Dear Mr Winston Peters

I am writing to you to recommend that you choose  a coalition with national.

National will lower the tax prices

It will help with the people that aren't so rich. So the will have more money for food, clean water and warmth. The warmth and clean water will stop them from getting sick. The food will stop them from starving to death.

Cows farts cost money(labour)

Don’t choose a coalition with labour, why because they are going to make farmers pay around thirty dollars when a cow farts. But how will they now when a cow farts will they have the owner stand outside all night and day waiting for a cow to fart.

Lower the house prices(national)

It will be easier for poor people to buy houses. Because they won't have to ask inosite people like us for money.it will also save them time and money.

Please choose to do a coalition with national because it would be critical if you pick labour.

SPS CHEFS ARE BACK

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On monday the 11th  of september, the room six kids cooked up an attractive experience. Along the way they had obstacles that they had to get around like getting the moose in the fridge at the right time. Also cooking everything precise.

For them to get the food precise they had to mix the cream until it turns into it turns into a cream consistency not a butter  consistenty.Next the white egg yolk to a fluffy  consistency. Then next they had to melt the chocolate chips in hot water on a stove. Once the had finished that proges they mixed all the ingredients and sugar. They put the chocolate mousse into cups and put them into the fridge. Once that had set for one hour they took it out of the fridge and put cream on top it and then put it back in the fridge for another hour.

The customers said they really enjoyed the tarterflet. But the chocolate moose was a bit sweet. When the waitress came in with the dirty dishes most of the cups we’re half full with chocolate moose still in it. They gave me some to try I agree it was really sweet. There was a big chunk of chocolate at the bottom of the cup which tasted like coffee which was really strong.

overall I think it was a pretty great restaurant because of all the laughter.    

B.O.P

                                                 BAY            OF          PLENTY

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When I got called over to marsiling my tummy starts to tickle I have bad butterflies that are  swarming in my tummy like a swarm of bees.

I am waiting behind the blocks… then all of a sudden they call out heat nine race twenty three. My heart is pounding I stand up on the block and all this random stuff go around my head. Then all I hear is “Take your marks BEEP”I dive in.

I do my fly kicks and come above the water and start my butterfly.I try with all my might to bet Bella it doesn’t work i’m just a few feet away. We finish the race.

I jump out of the pool. Bella congratulates me and I do back to her. I got last but i’m still happy with the time I got.