Slips

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On the way home from bay of plenty  it was pouring down. It was horrendous! There was lightning and thunder and really bad slips. It took 7 and ½ hours to get back from Papamoa.

When we started driving home for 7 ½ hours Papamoa.It started off as a sunny drive home. Then it got darker and darker until the point that you couldn’t see.Next is was at the point that rain came down then...BOOM! Lightning struck. The boys already started to get annoying.’’Oh, Oh you won!’’

So now there a big storm, I couldn’t get back to sleep. I was to worried that we would crash. A couple of minutes later there was a warning for a big slip on the road. When we reached the big slip it reminded me of a river because of all the water and rocks. I open the window and whimpered, “oh It’s cold!’’

We had a little pit stop in Mouko for you probably know what.(tiliote)We saw the Aquabladz. When we saw the  Aquabladz we left  straight away! The Aquabladz are our worst enemies but sometimes we are frenemies.

We got passed the Aquabladz finally so we got home safely everyone got home safely it was a very fun trip except the way home.If you have To go on a trip make sure you have comfy clothes, A blanket,pillow,food and water.