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S.O.S Puntion

 Mr D

Mr D has shining blue eyes that shimmers in the sun. MrD has slick brown hair, blondish hair that flies in the wind. His beard is like a fuzzy cat getting brushed at the vets. Mr D has creamy, brown skin that looks like lion skin / fur. His lips are thin and are the colour of a red ruby.

Mr D clothes are as fashionable as Mr Makos. His arms are are muscular, long and strong like a bodybuilder. Mr D shoulders are buff and rounded like the top of  a pump bottle.

Mr D loves cricket and rugby. His favourite thing is sport.

Slips

L.G. Link my ideas between my paragraphs

On the way home from bay of plenty  it was pouring down. It was horrendous! There was lightning and thunder and really bad slips. It took 7 and ½ hours to get back from Papamoa.

When we started driving home for 7 ½ hours Papamoa.It started off as a sunny drive home. Then it got darker and darker until the point that you couldn’t see.Next is was at the point that rain came down then...BOOM! Lightning struck. The boys already started to get annoying.’’Oh, Oh you won!’’

So now there a big storm, I couldn’t get back to sleep. I was to worried that we would crash. A couple of minutes later there was a warning for a big slip on the road. When we reached the big slip it reminded me of a river because of all the water and rocks. I open the window and whimpered, “oh It’s cold!’’

We had a little pit stop in Mouko for you probably know what.(tiliote)We saw the Aquabladz. When we saw the  Aquabladz we left  straight away! The Aquabladz are our worst enemies but sometimes we are frenemies.

We got passed the Aquabladz finally so we got home safely everyone got home safely it was a very fun trip except the way home.If you have To go on a trip make sure you have comfy clothes, A blanket,pillow,food and water.

Love is challenges

Once upon a time there was three best friends Crayton, Sebastian and Edith. One day the three best friends went to the park.

Crayton asked Edith “ Do you want to come on the monkey bars with me?”  “Okay,” replied Edith“No come play with me” yelled sebastian! “How about we go play on the rocket ship,”Edith calmly replied “YEAH” answer the boys

So they walked over to the rocket ship Edith started climbing while the boys fighted over her at the bottom “ I like Edith,” “no I like Edith,” “ I like her more,” “ no I do!” moned the boys “ Edith who do you like better?” yelled the boys “ I li…” “ me oh thank you,” spoke crayton “ but she didn’t say anything,” replied sebastian “ Do you know what we will do we will do challenges for me,”screamed Edith !

“Let the challenges begin” yelled Edith! “First we are going to be seeing who can do the monkey bars the fastest,”  added Edith …

“Craton wins so now since you won and all and you get me … go get me some food, rub my feet, curl my hair and clean my room PLEASE   demanded Edith!! “You know what I think Sebastian deserves you more than me,” whimpered crayton She's a queen.   

So now you know how to deal with  boys all thanks to Edith I would call her a queen at getting rid of boys

Little miss fork went for a walk in the forest and started to talk, along came a parrot who stole her carrot so she stabbed him with her fork.