B.O.P

                                                 BAY            OF          PLENTY

L.G link my ideas between each paragraphs

S.O.S punctuation

Type of writing=moment in time

When I got called over to marsiling my tummy starts to tickle I have bad butterflies that are  swarming in my tummy like a swarm of bees.

I am waiting behind the blocks… then all of a sudden they call out heat nine race twenty three. My heart is pounding I stand up on the block and all this random stuff go around my head. Then all I hear is “Take your marks BEEP”I dive in.

I do my fly kicks and come above the water and start my butterfly.I try with all my might to bet Bella it doesn’t work i’m just a few feet away. We finish the race.

I jump out of the pool. Bella congratulates me and I do back to her. I got last but i’m still happy with the time I got.